Friday, April 15, 2011

My Poem

Net books net books what a cool tool
Net books net books not for fools
But there good for some learning
no chatting or listening to music during school time
we just like learning and learning having a good time


  1. Great poem Kahalani. Pleased to see you getting some of your work on here and allowing the rest to see what you are up to.

    Keep up the writing and posting.

    Miss G

  2. Hello Kahalani
    I like your poem about the netbooks because i like
    listening to poems.I like writing poems because it's fun.It was cool how you made the poem sound like a rap.